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Anime mage character

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Mage character for my game.
Background by: [link]
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The image is very bright and eye catching with a simple and clean character design that's generally well drawn.

I do have to ask though, whether you drew the background yourself? As while the detail and texture is lovely and compliments the clean colouring of the character, it does seem slightly out of place due to the inconsistency.

The orange against the green works well and the head really stands out. Her black skirt and arms merge a little with the background. It make be a good idea to have a paler background colour in that area, so that the dark foreground colour stands out against it.

The shading on the character is generally rather nice. There are some lovely folds and creases on the clothing in particular. The stretch on the cloth between her breasts looks off though, as though the fabric is being pulled at a point where there wouldn't be tension.

Overall it is a very pleasant and pretty drawing
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